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SasuNaru- At 5pm by ~dtoda:icondtoda:



Naruto looked at his note, his watch, then back to his note again. He was becoming impatiant and started to tap his foot without realizing it.

"What am I even doing here? I don't even know who wrote this note, and here I am, waiting for them." Naruto read over the note for the fourth time.

Meet me at the bridge at 5pm. Don't be late!

It was now 5:30. Naruto leaned against the railing and sighed. How long must he wait? Just as he was contimplating if he should go home, he suddenly sensed someone getting closer. Finally! He thought as he spun around to face the person. He gasped when he saw that the person behind him was none other than Sasuke. Sasuke? Whats he doing here? Oh, don't tell me! Naruto lightly blushed.

"You? Are you the one who wrote this note?" Naruto demanded, shoving the note at Sasuke. He just nodded and shoved it back.

"Then why da hell are you so late?!" Naruto practicly screeched. "You told me not to be late, and here you are, 30 minutes late! Maybe I just won't listen to what you have to say!" Naruto swiftly turned his back on Sasuke.

"And what if I didn't need to tell you something, rather show you something?" Naruto slightly turned, to see Sasuke blush slightly. With a puzzled look, Naruto turned back around completely.

"Whats that supposed to mean? You don't seem to have anything to show me." Naruto slightly tilted his head to the left, in confusion. The look he gave Sasuke made him blush a deeper red, causing him to turn to try and hide it. He shook his head slightly and responded with a lump in his throat.

"No, it's not an object that I have to show you. It's something much different." Sasuke turned back around to face Naruto. "I have to show you...show you my..." Sasuke's face was now bright red.

"Your what? What is it Sasuke?" Naruto whined, like a child who wanted to know a secret. Sasuke cleared his throat and continued. "My, uh, feelings..."

"Your what?! You make me wait here for half an hour so that you could talk to me about your feelings?! Just go to Sakura or Ino! Not me!" Naruto looked pissed.

"No, Naruto. I can't talk to Sakura about this, let alone Ino! I have to talk to you about my feelings towards you!" Sasuke blurted out. Once realizing what he said, he spun around to hide the ever growing blush forming on his face. Naruto just stood there, dumbstruck.

"W-what do you mean towards me? Sasuke? Sasuke?! Answer m-" But before he knew it, Sasuke had spun around and shut him up by smashing his lips against Naruto's. Wide-eyed, Naruto couldn't help but blush. Instantly his brain turned to mush, and before he knew what he was doing, he was returning the kiss. Sasuke raised a hand and placed it on Naruto's cheek as they broke from the kiss. Sasuke smiled and looked Naruto strait in the eye. He could see the red sweeping across Naruto's face as he leaned in to capture Naruto's lips again, this time much more passionate. Sasuke nibbled at Naruto's bottom lip to try and gain entry to the moist cavern which was known as Naruto's mouth. He gained entry and started to explore the new area. As thier tongues caressed eachother, Naruto realized he was running out of air and pulled away, panting.

"W-what just happened?" Naruto asked, wide-eyed. Sasuke leaned in and placed his lips less than an inch away from Naruto's ear, his breath sending chills down Naruto's back as he spoke.

"Naruto, I love you." Naruto's eyes widened even more and his blush became redder, if it was possible.

"I-I...Sasuke..I....Love you, too..."
©2006-2009 ~dtoda
:icondtoda:

Author's Comments

Ok, this is my first FanFic, EVER! So, please don't flame me!! I'm just a poor, defenceless little.....oh, never mind. Well this is a SasuNaru FF, so it contains Yaoi...boyboy...if you don't like, don't read! It's just a one shot, may continue if I get an idea, but I highly doubt it...^^;
I would love it if you could leave your comments and/or improvements! Thanks! Oh, and I hope I put this under the right section...^^;
I'm pretty happy with the way it came out, for my first anyways...

Well, I don't think this needs a Mature warning....I'll just say 13+ for my sake! ^^;

Naruto and Sasuke don't belong to me :cry:

Comments


:icongummy-bear-power:
yayzerz!!!!! :clap: very nice! the whole situation was very in character! and yeah, you submitted correctly

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i am the pink sparkly emo princess gummy bear [link]
:icondtoda:
ok, good :)
and thank you muchly! :glomp:
wow, now I wanna write some more! :D

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My loves...Yaoi....ItaKisaIta, SasuNaruSasu, GaaLeeGaa, ShikaChouShika, KakaIruKaka, ShinoKankShino, KibaNejiKiba...AM I MISSING ANYONE?!......Ahhhh! Tha's all I truely love...*Winks*

Say hello to my fishie!
|>(v'.')
:icongummy-bear-power:
yay! more more more!!!!

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i am the pink sparkly emo princess gummy bear [link]
:icondtoda:
thanks! i'm on a roll! i have a second one up, and even have trhe second chapter written out! :boogie: So long, writers block! bwahahahaha!

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My loves...Yaoi....ItaKisaIta, SasuNaruSasu, GaaLeeGaa, ShikaChouShika, KakaIruKaka, ShinoKankShino, KibaNejiKiba...AM I MISSING ANYONE?!......Ahhhh! Tha's all I truely love...*Winks*

Say hello to my fishie!
|>(v'.')
:iconricku:
Awww, that was so damn adorable! I hardly ever fully read fanfictions, but now I did and I'm happy I did! \o/
So awesome story! X3

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"Olen taiteilija senkin hormoniheikki, en beibi."

The annoying follower of Captain Usoppu-sama<3

[link] Mah lovely little sister~:heart: ^3^
:icondtoda:
aww, thankies! I'm glad you liked it. ^.^

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My loves...Yaoi....ItaKisaIta, SasuNaruSasu, GaaLeeGaa, ShikaChouShika, KakaIruKaka, ShinoKankShino, KibaNejiKiba...AM I MISSING ANYONE?!......Ahhhh! Tha's all I truely love...*Winks*

Say hello to my fishie!
|>(v'.')
:iconricku:
I didn't like it, I loved it! 8D
And your welcome! \o/

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"Olen taiteilija senkin hormoniheikki, en beibi."

The annoying follower of Captain Usoppu-sama<3

[link] Mah lovely little sister~:heart: ^3^
:icondtoda:
yay! could you take a look at my other story too? to see if it's good? [link]

i'm so happy that someone other than AcoLordie likes my stories! (Hes a friend from school...)

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My loves...Yaoi....ItaKisaIta, SasuNaruSasu, GaaLeeGaa, ShikaChouShika, KakaIruKaka, ShinoKankShino, KibaNejiKiba...AM I MISSING ANYONE?!......Ahhhh! Tha's all I truely love...*Winks*

Say hello to my fishie!
|>(v'.')
:iconricku:
I'll read it! \o/

--
"Olen taiteilija senkin hormoniheikki, en beibi."

The annoying follower of Captain Usoppu-sama<3

[link] Mah lovely little sister~:heart: ^3^
:icondtoda:
aw, thankies! :hug:

--
My loves...Yaoi....ItaKisaIta, SasuNaruSasu, GaaLeeGaa, ShikaChouShika, KakaIruKaka, ShinoKankShino, KibaNejiKiba...AM I MISSING ANYONE?!......Ahhhh! Tha's all I truely love...*Winks*

Say hello to my fishie!
|>(v'.')

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