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SasuNaru- Thunder Ch.3 by ~dtoda:icondtoda:



"Promise that you won't run, get mad, hit me or even laugh?" Naruto nodded and Sasuke continued. "Well, ever since the first time I came over because of a storm I've had this 'feeling' in the pit of my stomache. It grows every time I come over and I guess last night really made it stand out. You're my best friend, I know that. But this feeling...I think it's..." Sasuke swallowed hard.

"Love."

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Naruto's mouth was hanging slightly open, his eyes wide. He could see a serious look on Sasuke's face, yet a deep blush had covered it as well. What? He..What? But, I..... Naruto's brain wouldn't work properly. As he was trying to make sense of the words in his head, he noticed Sasuke lower his head. You could easily see the sadness.

"See? You don't even have anything to say..." Sasuke pushed his chair back and stood up. "...I'll just be going now..." He turned to leave but was stopped by a tight hand wrapped around his wrist.

"No, don't...go. I'm just not use to..." He was cut off by Sasuke's low voice, sounding as if the tears were going to start at any second.

"What? Another guy liking you?!" He all but screamed.

"No! I'm not use to someone accually...feeling the same way as me, I've never had anyone return the feeling before." Naruto blushed and noticed that Sasuke had stopped pulling. He just stood there, motionless.

"What? You mean..." Suddenly a pair of arms flew around Sasuke and held him in the most powerful embrace either one had ever felt. Naruto placed his lips next to Sasuke's ear and spoke softly.

"I. Love. You...too." The two boys just stood there in eachothers arms before Sasuke cleared his throat, getting ready to speak. A small smirk crossed his lips as he began.

"I-" But before Sasuke could say another word, Naruto pulled away and pressed his lips to Sasuke's in a kiss. It was short, but sweet. Pulling away, he opened his eyes to see Sasuke's deep red blush that had now started to cover his neck. Naruto smiled sweetly and leaned into another, more passionate, kiss. Sasuke returned it and the two battled for dominance, Sasuke winning in the end. He licked at Naruto's bottom lip, and gained entry to his mouth. As thier tounges rubbed and carressed eachother Naruto moaned softly. He loved the taste of Sasuke. Once out of breath, they broke away, panting.

"Dobe..."

"Don't call me that!" Naruto whispered playfully.

"Well..." Sasuke thought about it for a few seconds before continuing. "Are we...a couple?" Sasuke's blush had gone away and was replaced by a small smile, not a smirk, but a real smile. Naruto rested his head in the crook of Sasuke's neck and lightly kissed his ear.

"Sure, if you want us to be." Naruto whispered, smiling back at Sasuke who just nodded.
©2006-2009 ~dtoda
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Author's Comments

Whoo Hoo! Here's Chapter 3! Next chapter gets hectic...and a little off plot, it end up making it's own plot in the process! Hmmm...I don't think this needs a Mature warning. But it sure is PG 13! Yaoi! Yaoi! Yaoi alert! If you don't like yaoi (boyboy) or having Sasuke and Naruto in an intamate relationship, press the back button...NOW! Hurry!

Anyways...Chapter 4 is coming on Monday. *Nods* Not too far away, eh? Ok, this chapter is REALLY short, for the most part. Yeah, but furture one's will make up for it. You'll see why I had to stop it when I did in the next chapter! :D

Heres a clue of what happens to make the next chapter hectic...KakaIru comes in, and ITACHI! Oh, and ItaKisa comes in soon, too...and the rest of the class is pulled into this by Itachi, but that's mainly in Chapter 5. LOTS of couples, but not all Yaoi. *Hits self in head* Enjoy!

Sasuke and Naruto don't belong to me...:cry:...but the stories do!

[Edit] I fanally got around to put the links to the other chapters!! ^^;
Chapter 1 --> [link]
Chapter 2 --> [link]

Chapter 4 --> [link]
Chapter 5 --> [link]
Chapter 6 --> [link]
Chapter 7 --> [link]

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awwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!! so sweet! i never knew Sasuke was so romantic! lol! as usual, LOVE IT!!!!! NEXT!!!!!!! XD

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i am the pink sparkly emo princess gummy bear [link]
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thank you, next up (On mon), crazy town! XD I can't wait to show you what Itachi's like! He's so...NOT Itachi!
*Is being beated by Itachi, with a stick* :dead:

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My loves...Yaoi....ItaKisaIta, SasuNaruSasu, GaaLeeGaa, ShikaChouShika, KakaIruKaka, ShinoKankShino, KibaNejiKiba...AM I MISSING ANYONE?!......Ahhhh! Tha's all I truely love...*Winks*

Say hello to my fishie!
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:iconpinknekolove:
I can hardly wait for the next chapter and for chapter 5 YAY! KisaIta! I hope you
make Itachi uke-ish! Yay! yaoi!

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YaY I'm soooo hyper! I could just explode!!!!! KABOOOM!!!! oOpsie
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:nod: most definatly! I'm TOTALLY obsessed with Yaoi! :o

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My loves...Yaoi....ItaKisaIta, SasuNaruSasu, GaaLeeGaa, ShikaChouShika, KakaIruKaka, ShinoKankShino, KibaNejiKiba...AM I MISSING ANYONE?!......Ahhhh! Tha's all I truely love...*Winks*

Say hello to my fishie!
|>(v'.')
:iconricku:
Cutecutecutecutecutecutecute!!!!! X3

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"Olen taiteilija senkin hormoniheikki, en beibi."

The annoying follower of Captain Usoppu-sama<3

[link] Mah lovely little sister~:heart: ^3^
:icondtoda:
thank you, warning! next chapter has the chaos! :dizzy:

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My loves...Yaoi....ItaKisaIta, SasuNaruSasu, GaaLeeGaa, ShikaChouShika, KakaIruKaka, ShinoKankShino, KibaNejiKiba...AM I MISSING ANYONE?!......Ahhhh! Tha's all I truely love...*Winks*

Say hello to my fishie!
|>(v'.')
:iconricku:
Wheee!!! 8D

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"Olen taiteilija senkin hormoniheikki, en beibi."

The annoying follower of Captain Usoppu-sama<3

[link] Mah lovely little sister~:heart: ^3^
:icondtoda:
good thin you're look forward to it! :thumbsup:

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My loves...Yaoi....ItaKisaIta, SasuNaruSasu, GaaLeeGaa, ShikaChouShika, KakaIruKaka, ShinoKankShino, KibaNejiKiba...AM I MISSING ANYONE?!......Ahhhh! Tha's all I truely love...*Winks*

Say hello to my fishie!
|>(v'.')
:iconricku:
Hell yeah. :D

--
"Olen taiteilija senkin hormoniheikki, en beibi."

The annoying follower of Captain Usoppu-sama<3

[link] Mah lovely little sister~:heart: ^3^
:icondtoda:
it even freaked me out a bit. I'm working on ch.8 :D

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My loves...Yaoi....ItaKisaIta, SasuNaruSasu, GaaLeeGaa, ShikaChouShika, KakaIruKaka, ShinoKankShino, KibaNejiKiba...AM I MISSING ANYONE?!......Ahhhh! Tha's all I truely love...*Winks*

Say hello to my fishie!
|>(v'.')

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